Persuasive Letter to the Tooth Fairy!!

                                       

Dear the Tooth Fairy, 

Normally I leave my tooth at Bridgwater for you because I get more money but today I had one of my molars taken out at the dentist. It was very painful, my tooth got taken out because there was a hole in it. Don't blame me, blame my Dad.

Could you please deliver the money to Tiverton, at mummy's new house. I think I deserve £2 because of my suffering. Also my bravery, I showed lots of it.   I'm even writing you this letter because I would like more money, thats why I'm sending this letter to you. My next reason to get some more money is because my tooth was pulled out, it was painful trust me.

Although it was pulled out by the dentist I hardly fussed even though he gave me a nasty injection. Surely that should get me some extra money? I've learnt my lesson to stop decay on my teeth by making sure I brush my teeth thoroughly and by only having fizzy drinks on special occasions.

Finally I think I should get £2 or over because of every thing I put in this letter.

Thank you,

Max

XXX

           

Which smile would you prefer?

   

@Bristol Science Museum!

Yesterday we went to @ Bristol, we all thought it wasn't going to take that long but it took 2 hours to do the 1st floor. Next we went to the planetarium. We were in a giant silver ball looking at 100s of millions of stars. But better, there are about 100 million galaxies out in the universe.

Max Labs Studio...

My favourite part of @Bristol was the studio, you filmed people and did sound effects and all that stuff. I filmed Guy, he did his part in a weird voice. Mummy filmed Guy. I did sound effects, it was epic! I also enjoyed the rockets. You stuck them onto a magnetic bit on a rope and you pulled the rope up, when it hit the top it fell off and the parachute opened, it deployed the rocket a couple of times!


Mummy liked finding the Gromits around Bristol. There were 80 Gromits around Bristol but we only saw 4.

Gromit invades Bristol!

Mummy is finding it really hard to choose because there was so much stuff to do. Mummy was fascinated by the different ways to move the water around like the hamster wheel and all the other pumps. Mummy also liked where you bit the metal, with your fingers in your ears, and you hear music but only if you use the instructions, you couldn't hear the music unless you bit the pole. Mummy also liked the building puzzles because she likes challenges and they were fun to try.

When I asked Guy, he said his favourite part was playing on the blower with Scott. Guy liked it because when he put his hands over the blower that made an inflatable globe go up and down, this made Scott giggle. Guy also liked being eaten by Scott as well as trying to keep Scott quiet during the planetarium show.

There is too much to mention everything we liked - the virtual volleyball, animation studio, magnetic sand that made sculptures, an aeroplane experiment with staff and walking through a tornado!

I asked Scott what he liked he said "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!"

My mile swim!

I did a mile swim to raise money in memory of my Gramps. This is a first draft of my thank you to the manager at the leisure centre.(Because I did it in pencil it is not showing as very neat but in real life it is neat!) In the next week I will put my edited presentation on my blog for all of you to see.

I'm Max, woo hoo its the summer holidays! I'm looking forward to going to a science place in Bristol, Crealy camping, fishing with my Dad, Kayaking and Knightshayes.
Thats all I know at the moment, but I hope you enjoy my blog.

Im 9 years old and just broke up

from school.

My favourite  sports are, Football, Tennis, Archery and Rookie Lifeguard.

I was in year 4 but we have 6 weeks holiday

now!!   

MaxLabs launches a Blog!

Max is going to write a blog over the summer, hopefully as his typing improves so will the quantity of each blog. He is however focusing on the quality of his writing and hopes to include many different genres including stories, diary-style entries, newspaper articles, factual reports and science experiments! Please encourage him positively with your comments! I look forward to seeing what he writes! :-) 

Good luck Max! x