Monday, 29 July 2013

Persuasive Letter to the Tooth Fairy!!

                                       

Dear the Tooth Fairy, 

Normally I leave my tooth at Bridgwater for you because I get more money but today I had one of my molars taken out at the dentist. It was very painful, my tooth got taken out because there was a hole in it. Don't blame me, blame my Dad.


Could you please deliver the money to Tiverton, at mummy's new house. I think I deserve £2 because of my suffering. Also my bravery, I showed lots of it.   I'm even writing you this letter because I would like more money, thats why I'm sending this letter to you. My next reason to get some more money is because my tooth was pulled out, it was painful trust me.


Although it was pulled out by the dentist I hardly fussed even though he gave me a nasty injection. Surely that should get me some extra money? I've learnt my lesson to stop decay on my teeth by making sure I brush my teeth thoroughly and by only having fizzy drinks on special occasions.



Finally I think I should get £2 or over because of every thing I put in this letter.


Thank you,
Max
XXX




           
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3 comments:

  1. Hope you enjoy my letter!

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  2. Hello Max, thank you for your letter, I hope you like my pictures as additions to your blog - I thought they would add to the magic! Have a good look at the pictures of the smile and decaying teeth - make sure you stick to your promises and limit your fizzy drinks, and brush those teeth carefully twice every day, and then you will keep the gleaming smile! No more decay for you!
    I've decided to give you £1.50 because although you have written a lovely letter, I do know you moaned somewhat whilst doing it! Plus I heard a rumour you didn't want a £2 coin!!
    Good luck with your next wobbly tooth, I look forward to my next letter to accompany it.
    Love from The Tooth Fairy xx
    PS I've left the tooth as a reminder of what you need to avoid!!

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  3. Granny said..... "You were very brave with your tooth extraction. Now-try and make sure you don't lose anymore teeth to decay. You only get two sets of teeth so look after them.Give them a really good clean twice a day..........hope you do get some money towards something-NOT sweets though!!"

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